Saturday, August 4, 2012

KONY 2012

                Should we make JOSEPH KONY famous for what he has done? Kony is a criminal in Uanda .Kony kidnepped young chldren and forced them to do  something bad like killing thier parents, becoming slaves. Kony has been doing this for 20years. nobady knows about Kny even though he was on the first place of the criminal reservation. We need the whole world to know about Kony. Kony 2012 video lets people kmow about Kony. Millions of people watched it already. Jason Russel, the one who made the video nad wants Kony to be famous. Let's be in the same team as him. Nobody really knows about Knoy, that is why children who are getting totured are invisible, people needs to know about Kony.
Here is the video Kony2012.......















         First of all, if we make Kony famous, people will donate more to help the problem. If more people know about him, more donations and less problems. People will think that Kony needs to stopped and to stop him, they should help the Kony 2012 group. They will donate a lot. People can stop Kony. Knoy cuts off teenager's ears, noses and lips. Gilrls became sex slaves. They were forced to marry some of the soldiers and had babies. How can Kony not be famous??? He did such a horrible things to the children. People can donate money and they can stop Kony. it is not hard to donate money. You just have to donate a little amount of money to arrest Kony. Is that little amount of money so infinitive? If kony gets famous, more people know about him and more people are going to donate. If they donate money, they can arrest Kony very easy.  People will realize that how Kony is really famous for what he has done. They will realize that Kony needs to be stopped and to stop him, all they need is their donation. So, it is better if Kony gets famous.




       Next, other governments will help more. When Kony gets famous, all of the people will talk about him and everybdy will be chattering about kony. Then, government will notice that Kony is really cruel and needs to be arrested right now. Then, governments all around the world will help arrest Kony. Realizing how big Kony's cruelty will help Kony to get arrested. if people all around the world talk about Kony, government all around the world will participate in aressting Kony.  If more governments help, more power, more soldiers, and more better technology.  If there is more soldiers and more power, there is greater chance to win. There is greater chance to arrest Kony. If governments all around the world teams up, it is 99.9% to win and arrest Kony. Making Kony famous, is a shortcut for arresting Joseph Kony, the cruel criminal.  Therefore, Kony should be famous.




       Finally,  Kony can be arrested fast. If everbody knew about Kony, people will be participating, donating a lot. For example, let's say that if there was Joseph Kony walking right outside of your house. If he was famous, everybody would get out of their house trying to get him or call the police. Then, he would be arrested in no time. If he was not famous, people would not care and let him go. They would let go of the chance. If Kony was hiding, and everybody knew him, he would be found very quickly. People would be just looking and then, they would see Kony hiding. There will be millions of people's eyes watching Joseph Kony. He would have no place to hide. People's little action can arrest a crimial like Joseph Kony. Without people's help, police, CSI, FBI, etc would have a hard time searching for Joseph Kony. If  Kony is famous, he will be arrested in no time.




     In conclusion, Joseph Kony should be arrested because more donations, more percentage of arresting Kony, and  a lot of people will know. Joeseph Kony has been doing a lot of horrilble things to the young children for 20years. he needs to be stopped or every young people will be suffering. They need to get hope for their life. They are young children. It is the time when you need hope, love, kindness. Kony is taking all of that away from them. We need to make Kony famous to get him arrested. Thus, Kony should be famous.




















1 comment:

  1. Your essay is well-thought out and the structure is good. It is important, however to spell check your work before you post it as there are several spelling errors. Also, after a period the next word first letter should always be capitalized.

    The body of your essay is also a little repetitive. Good luck with your next assignment!

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